Until the day i die

by Laura Elizabeth   Jul 5, 2005


Until the day i die
I'll stand by your side
this never-ending love
is like a roller coaster ride
we have our ups and downs
and yes we get in fights
screaming loving sounds
not only because we have our rights
baby, theres nothing more i want
then to die knowing you're OK
nothing more i want than to be here
so i lay

**comments PLEASE** I'm very new at this! and so proud of my first poem!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hey, I gave your poem a 5. It is really good, i liked it. You should keep writing your good. I am new at all of this too, i just started writing like a month ago. If u can will you comment on my poems too thanks. and great work!!

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