My fantasy

by Laura Elizabeth   Jul 5, 2005


My fantasy
Is you and me
Laying under a shady tree
Talking of how we we're meant to be
Read on and you will see
My fantasy is you and I
Never telling a single lie
In love till the day we die
Where our love is real in one's eye
My fantasy is strong and true
It sings of me
It sings of you
Baby, all i ever see
Is this fantasy of you and me

**comments PLEASE** omgsh this is my second poem... and i think its better than my other one... o well! thanks all of u who read my poem and left comments on it, u have no idea how much that meant to me!

-Laura Elizabeth

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very good its sweet and simple keep it up!

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Hey this one is really good too. How can you feel bad compared to me, you are really good!! I like your poems keep it up!!