Life long dream

by Laura Elizabeth   Jul 6, 2005


A kinda of remedy
The beat in my heart
A kind of sound
Together, not apart
The way you laugh
The way you scream
Thanks again for that life long dream

**comments PLEASE** YaY its my third poem! just not as good as my other ones. This is kinda hard.... rhyming i mean. thanks again guys for reading my poems and the comments..... SPECIAL THANKS: Alyssa, u have no clue how much you're comments mean to me! thanks so much

-Laura Elizabeth

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  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    Good poem this how I started doing poetry little short rhymes and you rhyme fine!

    take care