Comments : Just My Suicide Note (very sad)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyla

    I liked the fifth stanza the best. It was very well written and i really liked it! Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    i didnt want to read this poem. it does sadden me, i hope that you are ok. i Love you, ya it sounds weird but i got my reasons. hope your doing good. excellent writing. i always like your poems. great job. i didnt want to read this poem, cuz, well, the title. i prayed to God that you didnt do what i think you did. much Love

    Nick

  • 16 years ago

    by allie

    excellent poem!!! very well written...just dont do it!!!

    much love- allie

  • 16 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Very good poem..All of your poems are just amazing. Your a great writter, and probably a better person! Keep up the good work!

    Stay strong!

    <333 Katie

  • 16 years ago

    by Thao Anh

    That was a really good poem. 5/5
    Thao Anh Mai

  • 16 years ago

    by LostANDConfused

    I think it is awesome. 5/5!! I've made plenty a suicide note but just haven't really went through with it. Something always holds me back. I loved this poem. You're such a great poet. I'm sorry for your friend, Danny. Hope you feel better soon and hold your head up high.
    Jenn.

  • 16 years ago

    by tabithaa

    I LOVED that!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow...amazing, one of my favorite poems ive read yet, good job once again. keep writing and dont stop!!! 100/5!lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Wow very well written, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I usaully don't like suicide poems but I have to say you did an amazing job on this one! I really liked it and thought it was very well written and thought out! Suicide is a very sad and tragic subject but you expressed it well. We had a teacher in Junior High that committed suicide over false accusations made by students. The students came forward after his death and admitted they had lied. It was so sad to see a man lose his job his family and his life all because some students that were mad at him over something petty. He was the nicest man you would have ever met and those kids have to live with that the rest of their lives. He shot himself in the backyard of his home. So that's the reason I am not a big fan of suicide poems it takes me back to that tragic day. You did do an exellent job writing this I must say! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Great poem! You should be proud =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I like it...it was very sad ..excellent write. check out my poems sometime. xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by jencam

    very well written. I can tell you put alot of time and effort into it. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by nobody

    it was g8
    it made me cry!!!
    great rhyming
    i liked the change from tenses
    gr8 job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Denise

    Again, great poem, 5/5,
    xoxo
    Your biggest fan "denise"

  • 16 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Really amazing work you got there!
    I like all your poems!
    Keep it up!
    Stay strong!

    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by My tormented little heart

    All i can say is WOW...me and my b/f have decided that this is the best poem we have ever read...if you want to you could check out his site sometime...he writes poetry on occasion... www.xanga.com/TheTrojan87

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    this poem was really really good...i luv your poems they are freaken awsome!!!!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    that is SO good!! i love it so much! the words keep repeating in my head... i wish i could write something like that! i was seriously nearly crying as i read it! its so sad but its one of the best poems ive read. please check out my poems if u have the time and you really dont know how much it means to me if u comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katherine

    Hey, Tina. I loved this poems, one of my favorites from u!! But, u reallly shouldn't be thinking of such horrible things considering what has happened already. Think of it as ur duty to live your life for Danny. By the way, how is Stephany doing??