Her Suicide

by >> Beautifully Mistaken   Jul 7, 2005


Something so simple as life,
can fall to pieces,
and each and every piece can pierce you like a knife.
Just a teenage girl,
trying to make it in this life,
fighting the urge not to hurl.
Lift up her arm,
you will find all her problems solved,
with each and everyone carved into her arm.
A girl so perfect,
would cry herself to sleep at night,
with the thought of suicide in her mind.
She had so much potential,
they all cried,
as they all wondered why she would commit such a crime.
She took her life,
with the thought of suicide,
next to her fragile body lay what took her life, the knife.
The funeral came around,
everyone had a tear in their eye,
for a girl they never really found.
The girl they see in the coffin,
is one full of hate and despair,
not the one they know, who would never commit a sin.
She hid behind a mask of lies,
never revealing her other side,
which led to the unfortunate event of her suicide.

** Please comment and vote it would mean a lot to me, thanks Tania **

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  • 18 years ago

    by lover girl

    Omg thats so sad. i really good poem 5/5. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Umm wow...i like this..especially the last few lines. they had the deepst meaning for me i think. Just becuase i could see myself, and so many others who are like that i guess.
    take care hun x x x
    "don't do something permanent to fix a temporary problem"

  • 18 years ago

    by Brianne

    i really liked this!! btw thanks for voting on my poem : )

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Very good! Sad..And sounds like sumthing, a few people I know would do. Good job!

    Stay Strong!

    Much Love,
    x0x*Kat*x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by michelle

    it's a good poem keep doin what you do...plz read and comment on mys

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