Breathtakingly beautiful. The rhyming wasn’t as great towards the end, but it still works well…I love it.

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i changed my mind, the rhyming is great through the whole poem...just better in some places...good word choice in there too. i love it!

I liek this, it was really expressive. 5/5. keep writing.

i love it so much, it tells how love can make u feel so much pain , great job!

this is a wonderful peice of work!

This one I like the most so far

-Josiah