Everyday I Wake Up

by clickityclack   Jul 8, 2005


Everyday I wake up and wonder why God is letting me live another day if I can not have my way and be with the one I truly love.

Everyday I wake up and wonder if the day will be as bad as the last.

Everyday I wake up and wonder if I'll cry as much as I did the day before.

Everyday I wake up and think to myself why don't I just kill myself and end the torment.

Everyday I wake up and realize what an idiot I am for losing him.

Everyday I wake up and realize that I'll never be able win back his trust and make him see that he's everything to me and without him i really am I'm nothing.

Everyday I wake up wanting him more and more.

Everyday I wake up and curse myself for letting the one who loved me more than i hated myself get away.

Everyday I wake up and remember that there's nothing more to salvage and that everything we had is over.

Everyday I wake up and turn over once more so that I don't have to think about anything, remember anything or come to any heartbreaking realizations because it is simply too much for my broken soul to deal with.

I'm truly sorry for anyone who doesn't like this poem. its my very first i have never written before so I hope you all don't deal too harshly with me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    Well.. I like the message in the poem alot, I know the feeling exactly. But, some lines where really short and some really long, even though it worked out pritty good in this poem, it's very hard to make it work like that. So a suggestion would be to try and have fairly the same amounts of syllables in your lines:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    Nice work for your first poem. I liked the phrasing and your word choice. Such as sad poem, though. Cheer up (oh yeah, this coming from "Lady Death" herself...)

    I love this line: "Everyday I wake up and curse myself for letting the one who loved me more than i hated myself get away."

    Keep up the good work. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by BrOkEn DrEaMs14

    hey this is cindy ur poem is really good i can really relate 2 it u r really talented if thats ur first i really enjoed readin it

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