Suicide....

by stephanie   Jul 9, 2005


F**k life no one cares
thats why i am commiting suicide
thanks to all you that do
but this pain i just can't bare

i am cutting my wrists
watching them bleed
as it runs down my arms
i cut them deeper

but this sucide attempt isn't working
so i take that shell
put it into that gun
and pulled the trigger....

now i am gone
and everyones sad
except for the ones
who were still mad....

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-please vote/comment-
and im not really not going to commit suicide i dont think i ever could,,

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon

    great write.. sucide sucks tho dont do that

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    I like it what a good poem, keep up the writing, and leave the death thing for later on. Don't die on us, as I think you got alot to offer. Keep up the writing, I love your stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerbear

    VERY GOOD, YOU HAVE TALENT!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    STEPHANIE YOU GOT AN AWARD!!!! WOOOOOOO WHOOOOOOOOOO lol congrats haha
    *BECKY*

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    i liked it. very good. dont commit suicide. its not the answer.