The Girl and The Boy

by Iyla   Jul 9, 2005


* i didn't write the first 2 lines*

The Girl Asked:

Do you think is hurts to die?
because it hurts so much to stay alive,
always walking in the rain
and feeling tears running down from my eyes,
feeling scared at night
and using the razor to end my strife
do you think it would hurt
if i finally ended my life?

The Boy Answered:

I don't know if it hurts to die
and i know your going through a tough time,
i see you everyday walking in the rain,
and i do see the painful tears you cry,
i used to be afraid of the dark
but i stopped using my knife
all i know is that it would tare me apart,
if you left my side

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  • 18 years ago

    by KaYkAy

    this is a great poem... i find it very inspirational... keep writing...

    i would appreicate it if u read my work 2.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That was weied lol but really cute!

  • 18 years ago

    by josh baker

    your poems are sad but good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I liked how you wrote this.. Amazing.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    That was really sweet I wouldn't change a thing
    ~*Freak*~