By My Side

by [[GLAMOROUS__x]]   Jul 9, 2005


I can't stand the thought of you, Not being here by my side,
If you were here,
You would of seen how much I've cried.

Ever since you left,
My life has been torn apart,
From bad experience to bad experience,
I'm the one who takes it to heart.

I sit alone at night wondering what I did to you,
Why did you leave me?
I don't know what I'm going to do,
Without you by my side.

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  • 14 years ago

    by THE BEST U never HAD

    WOW'!
    AMAZiNG POEM'
    i'VE BEEN THERE BEFORE SO i KNOW HOW U FEEL....KEEP iT UP!
    =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I love all of your poetry.
    the ones i read anyways.
    :))
    this poem in by far my favorite though.
    I dont know why, it just is.
    dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

    And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
    thanks love!

    -jesss.
    Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    I really like this one. It wasn't a typical rhyming poem, but it went well. 5/5. Keep it up!
    Thnx for the comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*beautiful*~||||d!$a$teR||||

    5/5. keep it up.

    PEACE~~

    ((pReTtY iN PiNk))

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Awwwww that is such a melancholy poem. It flows very well! The question that you had in stanza 3, line 2 makes it sound really good and adds a lot of feeling 2 the poem. The rhyming makes the poem flow even better and its good that you didnt make every line rhyme. Keep up the great job 5/5

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