The end

by Greta Miller   Jul 11, 2005


I sit here dreaming of the end
Thinking you were my friend
Wondering if you would care
If suddenly I wasn't there
Cut deeper and deeper
just getting braver
all the while
it was just a trial
to know if you would see
or hear my silent plea
Now I know where I stand
On my feet I couldn't land
not anymore
its so much worse than before
Now I cant stop
With every crimson drop
I feel I'm in control
Which was a lie I know
The more I cut the more
I didn't feel until I hit the floor
Bleeding from the deep cuts
Dying slowly and painfully
I felt footsteps but couldn't reach the door
As I lay there dying on the floor
I heard a knock but
couldn't reach cause of the cuts
Things were growing darker
My eyes were clouding over
Everything went black
My head hit the floor with a smack
but not before
someone busted in the door
I'll never know
Who found me there
Who busted in the door
And found me in the floor.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael Young

    Excellent poem alot of effort in that
    Thankyou for the comment on mine
    Hope to see more of you
    Rachxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This is a great poem. Be careful, when you feel you need to cut I sugest picking up your pen instead. your writing is passionate, Keep it up

    Take Care
    Jennx0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    Dis is great b, i luv it. keep em cumin.doffy