WhEn YoU tOlD mE yOu LoVeD mE . . .

by Nanita   Jul 12, 2005


When you hurt me
did I cry?
When you told me you loved me
was that a lie?
Can you feel the pain
that makes me want to die?
Can you see the demon
that's building up inside?
Can you taste the love
that I once used to hide?
Did you feel the razor
when I made it slide
cutting my body
making all my feelings collide?
Was it your fault
I lost my mind?
Was it your love
that made me want to leave it all behind?
Was it my heart
you were trying to find?
Was it just luck
that we were combined?
Was it your soul
that made me want to stay by your side?
When you told me you loved me
was that a lie?

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  • 17 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Thats a really nice poem sad but good. you have potential, keep writing. xtake carexx

  • 18 years ago

    by Btw Raising Hell And Amazing Grace

    i really liek this poem i have always it expresses what you feel inside and i konw that is realyl hard to do

  • 18 years ago

    by Nanita

    PLEASE COMMENT OR RATE THIS POEM!!! IT WOULD REALLY MEAN A LOT TO ME... REALLY.

    THIS WAS WRITTEN TO MY FIRST LOVE BUT DO TO OUR RACE WE COULD NOT BE TOGETHER...

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