Comments : Love should be forever

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    Thanks for the comments people!
    Well it was about soemone, but maybe thats how you saw it, thanks for the comment any how!
    Thanks
    Love Always
    xoxo Allison xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Hey allison,
    that one was awesome.. loved the rhyme scheme and you must have liked him alot. but the only thing is that it just kind of came to an hend @ less maybe go on for one more line or so.. but i dont know.. just a thought.. Anyways i liked it alot great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    its cute! Altho i have to say you have better. I like it tho, it sounds like your talking about your first love, its cute!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Very cute poem! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Your right! it was one of the better! very well written and i know what you mean the poem is forever! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    aww, that's so cute. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    its pretty good... not your best work... but it isnt the worst ive seen from others... so maybe if you lengthen it and put some more emotion into it it might get a five... keep em coming.. and thanks
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    awsome poem. great emotion filled poem. I loved it.
    ~ItalianStallion~