Comments : Im sorry i cant be perfect

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Very good! I enjoyed it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Another good one. lol green hair ?!? extreme but cool lol.
    Gotta understand tho Grandmas are old timey and my grandma is the same way, ive never been so scared when i got my tounge peirced. lol
    2 more years till tatoo -p anyways 5/5 another good one

  • 18 years ago

    by TaTtErEdXhEaRt

    That was good..Had a serious, yet comical vibe. 4/5. Come check out some of my featured poems sometime. nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by kristen

    So sad. good
    !!!

  • Wow...u got a tough grandma....thats bad...that she be saying that stuff about you...well i love the way you wrote this...so experienced like...keep it up and i promise you ....you will get far

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i feel the same!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great poem, I know exactly how you feel. Very easy to relate too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Nice work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I feel 4 u &me both

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Haha i liked this one... again another i can relate to... infact im going to court on monday because my grandma is sueing me.. oh boy! yeah but haha i liked the part about your hair being green... very different... you did a very nice job with this one.. keep it up!

    sammie