Death

by Dreaming_Awake   Jul 13, 2005


The truth is there
there, hiding in the coroner
the coroner, where my death bed lay
laying, there in the coroner hopping to die
dieing, slowly from the cuts i inflict
inflicting, pain in my heart
my heart, is where he is supposed to be
supposed, to be there just for me
just for me, I'm the only one
the only, one he loves
he says, he loves me with all his heart
the hear,t of mine is torn in pieces

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  • 18 years ago

    by aga

    Ohh my i LOVE this poem!!ur #1
    ~aga~

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Wow hun i hope you dont hurt urself.TH epoem had such good emotion well done keep itup love your work

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Hey, you've written this with loads of emotion and it comes through when you read it, i like this poem alot it's really good.
    Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it.

    <3 Charli XxXxXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by pag

    that's an awsome poem with lots of emotion. i hope you don't do anything to hurt yourself, you're suck a great poet don't through it away when life can still get better, anyway that's an really great poemwritten and reads beautifully

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