Simply sweet and beautiful. Worded perfectly.

xxx

Beautiful write! It’s truly perfect. It's filled with love and emotion. So heartfelt and sweet!

There's one thing...I don't think commas and periods are necessary in this piece.
All I need is to see your smile(.)
And I melt down to the floor.
You have a period there but it's not a complete sentence as you go on to add "AND" in the next line.

Besides that excellent write! :)

Aww that was such a cute poem! 5

excellantay! wonderful hun! great job.. gave youa five.. and will use in the book im making.. thanks
amanda

Beautiful poem, I could tell that you had to have a lot of emotion for who ever you wrote this song. This is a very nice poem.

This was a very sweet poem reminded me of my first love. seems like ages ago good write none the less two thumbs up!!!

another great poem from you!!! keep it up!!!

I know I read this and commented on it already BUT "met" should be "meant".........I think

"That's how I know we're meANt to be"