its awesome... makes my heart tingle !

pls check out my poem...lets make a deal

Wow, This is so good. I love it. I felt like I knew exactly what you were going through. So good. Awsome writting!
Love Always
Allison

How sad...Beautiful poem. Such an awesome dedication to a lost loved one. I love it.

I would suggest that you change "ur" to "your" in the title. I can say that may deter readers from reading it. And another suggestion would be to erase the commas and periods after each line.

I love the poem though. Excellent. It's full of love and memories so divine. 5/5 Perfection! :)

Ok...I had a ditzy moment...."ur" should be "you'RE" :)

::in love with this one:: i like this one alot :) gave it a 5 :)

sorry about your lost i lost two important people in my lifn half a year one thing i can tell you is living our life doesn't mean that you forgot. laughing means you remember. trust me whom ever you lost wouldn't want you to be sad, they want to see you happy

that was sad! but it was realy good! 5/5

awww sad poem. good work

awwww, Britney, that is really saad aswel and thanks fopr all of your comments, you too have true talents!!!

I really enjoyed this... you are a good poet keep it up... Xox Sherrie

awwww thats so sad, but very well written. i like this poem well done!

That's beautiful but sad...nicely written.

xxx

~*tear~*i luv your poem your so good @ dz thnx 4 da comments

well thought out and uses great emotion. Very fluid and overall feel to it is great. Very good job! I hope something like this didn't happen to you though, and if it did, I pray that you stay strong. ^_^x

i love youe poem

wow, great poem, very sad and well written. 5/5

reli gud.. very touching and deep.. almost made me cry..
keep it up
nouna
thnx 4 the comments.. they meant so much :)

So sad.......hugs. So true.

Loved it. Short and 'direct' sentences with alot of feelings put in to them. Excellent work.