Shit... I feel like you got similar writing talents to me. Rock on! Great poem girl!

this poem is, cant find the words. excellent? brilliant? there should be a vote for more than 5. u can have cyber 10. *nods* lol. truly great.

Lv A, x

wow... well written! 5/5

Wow...great...Wasn't expecting the end there, nice twist! 5/5! Keep it up!

wow, this is really good! i absolutely LOVE the ending! keep it up girlie! 5/5

Filled with emotion, I can see where you're coming from, great job!! i definately give it a 5/5

A very powerful poem. You have a near perfect rhythm, and that's a very rare talent.

Keep up the work.

I liked that poem alot, it had a great flow and well written rhymes that matched in perfectly, what can I say, I loved it.

Best wishes,
Patrik

PS. Thanks for your comments earlier

wow awsome poem ... i like the structure like how it is portrayed i like is the word ... very well done 5/5

wow, you seem to have a knack for poems that just flow like the wind... although this poem made my eyes water i will give it a 5! lol..

That was one of the most amazing poems I have ever read, well done.

wow.. very sad. Great ending I loved the way you tied it up. This poem was written excellently. Your rhymes go together perfectly. 5/5!

well written, i loved it! 5/5
take care, xoxoxo

Hey,

Great poem, i loved the flow and the words used.

well done the idea was good with the twist at the end :)

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awsome so full of heartache i can relate to this poem 100% if anyone has any feelings and when they read this they'll feel the heart ache too great job kayla keep up the awsome poems

kinda confusing but good

Great poem ...definatly a 5

keep writing
::Br0k3n::

Nice poem, it flowed really well and was really powerful. It seems as though the speaker is the mother of the girl, a mother in despair. Although it was well written, it didn't have much originality within it, as many teens now are writing about depression and cutting etc. Still nice, 4/5 Kim x

Wow! This poem was amazing. I know how hard it can be once you turn to the blade, but all you can do is try to stay strong. I wish you the best of luck. Great poem. Keep up the talent! 5/5!

Great poem.. I voted a 5! =D please check out any of my poems.. hugs!