Not Ready (It's more of a song...)

by AnotherJournalEntry   Jul 13, 2005


There once was a time when I wanted to give up
Wanted to let go, let it all go
Couldn't handle it anymore
Didn't know what to do.

But I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

I wanna live again
I wanna be me
I wanna forget that dark time
And just move on

Cuz I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

There was a time when I was dead
When I felt unloved,
But no, now I'm living again
Getting on, moving on, living on

And I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

I wanna live on
I wanna be me
I wanna be free
Let's just go on again

So I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

I'll make it through all right
Now I know I can get through
I can make it through another day
And I'm all right

And I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

Yeah I'm not ready to give up anymore
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
Not gonna give up just yet
Don't wanna let go

I'm not gonna give up
I'm not gonna let go
I'm fine, I'll be just fine
I'm not ready.

A/N: This is more of a song than a poem, but I guess it could be both. PLEASE REVIEW AND RATE!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Ok, i see how it is a song, and i understand the chorus part. To help carry a rhythm include maybe some imagery? You have a better sense of music than i do.. I just listen to it. But its not bad 4/5 here.

  • 18 years ago

    by AnotherJournalEntry

    Yup...This is mine! (but I had my cousin help with the tune) Thanks for all the comments!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Was That Your Work?? LOL
    I believe its a song more than a poem
    but i loved it ;)
    loved the lines :
    I wanna live on
    I wanna be me
    I wanna be free
    its awesome
    Keep Ur good work
    Good Luck and Take Care
    Nema
    XoXoXoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    maybe we'll hear this on the box someday, not bad

  • 18 years ago

    by AnotherJournalEntry

    it's a song...so the lines that are repeated are the chorus.

    thanks for the comment!! <33