Death

by Emma   Jul 14, 2005


Life has ended, or
has it.Do we know what
will await us, or do
we just think we do.
We will never know
only because no one
will ever survive death.

Please comment. still new at writing. so help me. comments would be nice.

trying to learn

~`~pain of You~`~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was so cool. Keep up the good work. You are very talented. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    I'll give u 5/5 becuz u made the effort
    its a nice poem
    should be longer
    must rhyme..

  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    Also a good poem but to short. The content in the poem is great but I think it can be worked out with more words, hardly have time to get the flow up in this poem before it's over.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    your poems do seem meaningful...you say a lot with few words...keep writing.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    good poem, work on structure and you're set :)

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