A Plea for Love

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jul 14, 2005


I think I need you
After 3 months of pain
I can't clear my mind
I can't stop this rain

It's crashing my world
Ripping my heart
These memories fade
How did this start?

Please girl
I'm on my knee
I love you and need
Hear my plea

The memory cloud
Of the beautiful you
Floats away in the sky
Begins to tear me to two

I know you can see me
I know you can hear
Maybe that's a reason
Why you won't come near

The uneasiness
Of my sleep at night
All just because
Of you as my last sight

Tears stroll down
My unwanted face
I've cried too hard
I can't replace

I've cried my heart
As dry as any other
I need this to stop
I'm being smother

So one last time
One last attempt
I grab your hand
Please don't contempt

I say these words
That spills outta my smile
I say to you again
Your worth my while

I love you
More then any
Please give me love
Give me plenty

I've needed you
For such a long time
Our love was beautiful
Like a wind chime

Please come back
I have no more tears
Please be with me
For many more years

I know it's not that great, but I just sorta needed to write something down, anywayz please vote and comment! It'll mean a lot!! Thanks!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    ummm....wow thats a awesome poem!!! i loved it!! you are VERY talented!! even if you say you aint!
    Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    ok, it's a very powerful message, but a couple lines didn't make sense...and the rhyming in a couple times seemed forced...could you maybe try to get it to flow a little smoother?

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    This was a beautiful poem. only a few spelling mistakes, but all in all the poem was very heartfelt.

    Take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work!
    Love Always
    Allison

  • 18 years ago

    by allison

    Wow, First of all you're an amazing writter and seconly you sound liek an amazing guy. Keep up the great work!
    Love Always
    Allison