Suicide

by Lovemylove   Jul 14, 2005


You beat me, and tear my flesh with ever cruel hateful word. I thought father's were suppose to care, but I know you don't. I try to please you I really do, but it seems the more I do, the less you see in me. Well all thats going to change, because after this maybe you'll see maybe you wont, but all I know is its time for my suicide. So as I write this note tonight I cry because I really don't want to die but I can't take this abuse. I know it will never stop unless I die.So I take out my knife, and watch it gleam in the moonlight. Without another word I stab it into my emotionless heart. Within in the next few minutes my suicide is complete.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Deep Poem, and i'm glad u aren't doin it....ur a really talented writer! Keep up da awesome work!

    Also thanx for comment on my own poerty, glad ya liked it! =D

    Ne wayz g2g ttylz byez!
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    deep but im glad u arent doing it u have talent. thanks for the comment im glad that u like my poem.
    love
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    No I aint doing that its just a poem, I was just in a black mood. No worries ya'll. Thanks for commenting on my poem ya'll.

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    this was good. but hopefully your not thinkin about doing that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Wow that's deep hope you don't do that thou !