Your book of dreams

by Emma   Jul 15, 2005


The book of dreams
cast a shadow on what used to be.
the hopes the prayers and cries of the innocent.
The book of dreams is in your heart so will you ever open it again.

comment and rate my poems. i am new at this. only my 3rd poem. please tell me what you think and thax for the other comment on my other works.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Short.. But Brilliant... Feel you could have made more out of it though.. Great write, KInd regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    good rhyming. i liked it alot

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was really good... i loved... keep writing ur really good at it... thanks for the comment.... xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    thax i wil read some of your stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by jaki

    if all your poems are as good as this, then no one would ever know you were a beginner, keep up the good work and i will have a look at some of your other stuff =)

    *jackie*

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