Well written, you use interesting words where as I just stick to the plain stuff... That was very interesting and a good read...It made me think... I don't know why but it did...

Well done!

-Lyd

WOW! thats really all that can be said. this was one of the most appealing poems I've ever read. The thought process you went through seems so effortless as if it just came to your mind, yet it is so elaborate.

"A mother holds her newborn child
in a cataleptic umbilical noose."

I loved that line. it was so symbolical, because a mother is supposed to be caring, but she's silently killing her child, unkowingly. thats how I read it atleast. Good job!

Take care,
Renee

The words seem to drag you into your feelings and how you see things. Very impressive.

omg this is so good you deff. hav true talent...very deep and so touching!!! i love it!!! 5/5

hiya that poem was really beautiful. i am embarrased to say i didnt know many of the big words but i really liked it none the less *claps*

Hey hun, excellent write to come back with. Inspirational really. Simply beautiful!! =D

All my love
Kel

woah... this was just so powerful, it completely blew me away. The word choice is excellent.
Very well written.
xxxxxxx

very nice
i liked how you spoke of alot of different scenarios and used them to make the same point

i liked this very much
;)

very nice
i liked how you spoke of alot of different scenarios and used them to make the same point

i liked this very much
;)

Very unique, havn't read anything like this one before....You have a special way of expressing yourself =0)
Could you please comment on my poems:

Please hear me
Dear Mia
Broken heart

or orther poems you would like to read =0) Thank you so much in advance....

*Hugs Sabrina*

Very cool word choice. You're one of the few that seems to use words like that to twist into your poems like incricate lace on a blanket or scarf. It was an amazing piece. Nice word choice and a cool dark tone.
~Faith of the Fallen

Very nicely written. I loved the way you wrote the whole poem. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

wow... so dark and so beautiful!!! i love the words you used... very powerful. keep it up!
-xXx-

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

Oh my! You're back! Welcome back to posting!
I loved this, it felt so... alone. And desperate. It was beautifully written, of course, but that's no surprise.
I love your work, and I can imagine a collection of your dark poems in a book. And when that happens, I will be the first to buy it. Because you are so bloody talented. And you better realise that. Keep writing- because the gift you had would be wasted if you stopped.

+ also a band name (old NZ band), an album name (Danse Macabre - The Faint) and a book by Stephen King. i like the last lines, "With our insignia or our legacy,
we dance the danse macabre." cool man.