hehe.. *claps slowly* I absolutley love the first stanza.
You placed in irony very well

"positive thoughts, stupid!"
"I mean think positivly, you gorgeous person"

that line alone caught my attention very quickly.
Ahhh.. anyways, You are very skilled and talented beyonds words. You and only a handful of people her can make me smile when I'm reading such a poem. I'm not saying that like it's something that you should be honored by (no, no, no. I'm not that self-centered) I'm just saying I could smile easily when I'm reading one of your poems. i hope you continue to make great work (so that I can continue smiling) ^_^x

sorry for the bad grammer, it too late where I'm living to be awake.

Oh my gosh I loved this part...

Positive thoughts, stupid!
I mean, think positively, you gorgeous person.

It like fit together perfectly and when you're reading it you almost read the first line mad-like and the whole tone changes in the 2nd line....that was such a great poem...KIU!

xoxo-Sierra Rae

well,I can not say I know exactly what you were trying to present with this peice. it was rather confusing, with all the parentheses and random wording.I got a wierd mixed message, but someone loved this part:

"Remember: the past is unchangeable
And the future is not controllable"

other than that...it seemed to hold my attention 'till the end, so it was fair.

its good, really good.. but for some reason.. right now i cant get into it;... i think its cuz of my mood right now... but i do know that its a great/terrific poem! keep up the good work.. its a good mood booster!! and very positive
much love
amanda

great poem girl. I really enjoyed reading it. you're really talented.
much love,
marjan

Hey rose! yet another great write! Loved it 5/5

"Things may or may not go as planned and things
Surely won’t go perfectly
Be that as it may, everything will be okay" thats the best part of the poem to me because its so true! Anyways i loved the latest like always!

i understand this poem. great job. 5/5
xx
paulette

I believe that I need to listen to this.. Very much so..