Thoughts of a closet case

No this poem is not about me but i was inspired by a show i saw i want to know if its believable ..or it sounds fake and cheesy ...any feedback would be appreciated thank you!........................

I have a secret
a secret i hold deep inside,
releasing it would cause tons of drama and monstrous tides,
on my life of ridiculous lies
why ,
why does society say its wrong?
dammit Ive waited way too long !
I'm bursting ,
thirsting for no more regret,
look there goes another sunset,
way beneath the earths crust
here i go,I'm gonna bust,
i wanna hold the truth in my hands
and be loved for who i am,
unpack my bags, not hide my stuff
god, no one said coming out would be this tuff!!!