I really liked that, and it went from one place to another reely well. My mum was a lot like that but now i dont live there so yay!!!

I LOVED IT!!! great job... it sounds like what im feeling towards both of my parents right now and have for a couple years... (since I was 15lol)... but awesome loved it....
much love
amanda

Wow that was awsome, very emotional....I relate to this somehow =0) very great job, briliant!!

*Hugs sabrina*

Oh does that ever bring back memories for me. My mom was the same way. The thing they don't realize is their behavior can really make a person rebel. That's what ended up happening in my case. I did get into a lot of trouble but learned a lot of leason along the way. I know things would have gone differently if she would have just backed off. I have a son and I swear to never do that to him. It's hard to deal with I can feel your frustration! Very well written from the bottom of your heart! I hope she will see you need to be able to have some freedom plus guidance. I know they mean well but that way of parenting tends to back fire. It sounds like you have a good head on your shoulders! Best of luck to you! Take Care! Brooke~

ok well seeing how you read most of my poems. i wanted to read yours. ok i am only 14. nd i feel the SAME way. i think it is like in the parent handbook to make us cry. but neways.. its great i loved it!! nd thanks for all the help with mine! but i realized i dont think you read 2 of mine, One is Called-
Taunting Death. nd the other one is called- Hurry Up. like i dont care but i thought you might wanna read them! keep it up! you better not stop writing either!! chelsea rose

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omg i feel the same way,my mom still baby's me she thinks that i am still her little girl but im not!!

I can relate!! My mom is sort of like that!! Great job!! 5/5 Keep writin!!

Hey i really luved this poem.....it was soo emotional! ya did a great job! Keep it up!

Also thanx for reviewin ma poem....and for da advice...i'll make sure to make ma poems less choppy in da future.....ne wayz g2g ttylz bye!xoxo

okay i like this one cuz i can relate me -n- rita *my mom* r the same way,...

love alwayz
angie