What went wrong

by AnorexicDream   Jul 18, 2005


She sits in her room
remembers how there love blooms
she remembers the days they would walk
and the day he said we need to talk
she thought that day was gonna end it
but he said i love you, on you i never wanna quit
she was so deep in love
him she spent her days thinking of
she wondered if he thought of her
now that its over she grabs the razor
he made her happy
and made her feel free
she doesn't know what she did wrong
her feelings for him were so strong
she wonders what she did
is it because the cuts she hid
she just wants to know what is going on
she needs someone she belongs
she remembers the way is arms felt
and how his kiss made her melt
she wants to know what happened to them
she wants him back now once again
she never meant to hurt him
she loved him is that a sin
she just doesn't understand
why he doesn't wanna hold her hand
she was in love so deep
but her he didn't want to keep
she sits in her room as tears fall
i lost him now i have nothing at all
he was her everything
but to him she meant nothing
she now sees that
she wonders maybe its because I'm fat
she cries so hard she cant breathe
she is wondering why did he have to leave
he meant the world
to this once girl
she called him up one last time
and she read him this rhyme
he said its over she let out a sigh
and finally said goodbye
little did he know
how far she would go
he called in the morning to say i want u back
but little did he know last night her skin she hacked
he got the news paper the next day
and he didn't expect it to say
"girl commits suicide over a lost love
but now she is up above"
he read it and didn't expert it to be
her u see he felt so guilty
he couldn't live his life without her
so he grabbed the razor
he cut way to deep
he wanted to fall into a permanent sleep
but he lived he woke in a hospital bed
realizing he wasn't dead
he later went insane
if he hadn't broken up with her would things have been the same

*i know it isn't very good and quite random but i really like it i think its interesting not about me hmm please rate and comment*

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    that was amazing....the ending gave me the chills....aww i miss you so much *hugs* we really need to catch up...hope you're doing alright....love you uber lots! lol...

    -brittnay-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    very expressive and clearly written !great job

  • 18 years ago

    by steviee

    this is a really good poem.. i know what u are sayin! its really good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Brenda¤

    That was a good poem. I like it alot. :) *xoxo*

  • 18 years ago

    by Hunny Bunny

    i liked this alot hun. it ment something to me i can relate and so i treasure this poem now and forever. its reaaly touching and your a great writer so keep the work up