Dark thoughts

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Jul 18, 2005


Im in the shower
trying to wash away the pain
scrubbing til my skin is red and raw
my body is hot
but my mind is cold with thoughts
of hatred, hell, and murder

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Your poems are so short but they still have all the meaning in the world. i love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Short..Deep..And To The Point 5.0!

  • 18 years ago

    by Suchapoetictradgedy

    Its good, but needs more detail, you should add colorful language to it....make us feel wat you really felt when you wrote this.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ