Comments : SMILE

  • 15 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    are you serious i thought it was awesome, it really was good, i really liked the last bit abouthow your sadness is hidden behind a smile, it is so true, i can relate!!! 5/5!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    this is just like me i hide so much.. but what can i do no noe cares anyway right?.. well anyway thanks for you comment on my poem it means a lot thansk so much 5/5 keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by DAYLON

    "Da", which means from Welsh to English "Good". I agree with your spouse if I didn't read the one later on, this is high 10 out of 5. Excellent, as we do hide what we really want to show people but society tries to comform us. Excellent, hugs all round.

  • 15 years ago

    by Avellana

    Of all your poems i've read, this is my favourite. You can really 'get it' cos u been through it too. really good.

    lv A, x

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    I'm smiling, this one is nice and I like the style. Good write.

    Warm regards,


  • 14 years ago

    by kida

    I luv it it is so deep and so true!

  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    So sad. :(

  • 13 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    This is a good beginning poem. It tells much about myself, I keep whatever negative emotions I have in me and never let them out, and you say it simply enough. But I think you should make another one to add onto this why you cannot let it out even deeper, and just plain more to it. I like it though keep it up.