Lovely...really touching...and I like the rose petal falling in the begining... :)

xxx

your such a good writter i luv your poems keep it up

Awwwww, that was so sweet!

loved the rhyming scheme

natalie

Very nicely written!! i enjoyed it and i hope you've showed your man your poetry its good! keep it up! 5/5

aww very sad...good emotion. 5/5

AWWW this is sooo sad. I loved it though! You are a great writer!

<3Much Love<3
~*hAiLy*~

nice one.. agen!! reli nice.. it jus got me thinkin bout how many "its the best interest for them" it takes 4 me 2 reli believe its true.. maybe infinity.. coz i believe that 4 true love, u dont ever stay apart.. ur in 4 life.. thers no such thing as "its 4 the better than we be apart" or " am leavin coz i love u".. i reli lovd ur poem.. gr8 rhyme, too
keep it up
nouna

aw thats so sad....i loved the flow very good....awsome job on this poem 5/5

very sad poem indeed. wonderfully written. keep up the good work

very, very touching. i've never gone through a break-up like that before but i have broken up and can safely say i know how you feel. much luv, bye.

awww. <3 5/5 well written..[I can't read one of the 4 poems 'cos it's blocked on my comp, I;ll read a different one though! <3]

That's sad....hope this isn't a true story!!!Great job, keep writing!!

*HUgs sabrina*

This is good, but the start is definetly better than the ending. It flows a little better. Overall it's well written though.
Sarahxxx

Very well written, flowed nicely and liked the way you used your ideas. good job! 5/5

i love your style of writing. its really good. all your poems are fab, keep writing. xxx

If that's based on an experience, which I think, then I'm sorry for you, know how it feels. Well written poem though.

Best wishes,
Patrik

This is a great poem and I'm sure many women can relate! Great job! 5/5...again...:o)

awww this one is so sweet...i love how the idea progresses til the last stanza and that just ends it perfectly. great idea to write about and good word choice, i could feel the emotion in it. take care

Sara