So I guess this is goodbye!

by Amanda   Jul 19, 2005


I'm letting my emotions flow
No matter how they may come out
I know that in the back of my mind
I have one too many doubts

Doubts that tell me, "I need help!"
Help that I know I can get
If I try just a little harder
And get the help I NEED to get

I'm not getting into details
Let's just say that I've been hurt
Hurt from love and hurt from hate
And, yet there's nothing I could've learned

Rhyming is a pain in the a-s
Because you never say what you want to come out
It always ends up being different
Than the thought of reaching out

I could make this go on and on
But, I mean, why?
Nothing I do or say is right
So I guess this is goodbye

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  • 17 years ago

    by chris

    I liked this poem, in the fact that you talked about poerty and how everyone thinks it should rhyme and thats shit cause that isnt poetry poetry to me is just the free flowing emotion of the pen, if it rhymes there was to much thought in it. but good poem ill check out more of your stuff later

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    This poem is very heartfelt, and I can feel every word in every line, it gave me chills, excellent writing!
    please chek out my newest poem "help me" stephy :):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Great Poem :D Know the feeling, you start out with a thought, but as soon as you start to rhyme, the point gets lost along the way. simply because you are finding things that rhyme.. Great poem though, kind regards from kane

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