Good Luck

by TragicRomance   Jul 19, 2005


I guess that this is over now,
I guess this is the falling out;
I know it will not be long before you are gone,
it seems you won't be here at dawn;

I know you will never wear the Army greens,
because you will go off into the Marines;
you know I will always be proud of you,
for everything you ever do;

As you pack to go away,
I know you won't be here the next day;
I will try to act happy and not sad,
but inside I will be feeling nothing but bad;

I will always have support for you and your decsions,
I knew it would eventually happen but I kept ignoring all the visions;
you are a true soldier and you'll come out better than before,
you are a true soldier whom is very very mature;

When you leave and go into combat zone,
I wonder if you'll come back home;
even though you call me "duck",
I still wish you the best of luck;

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow. That was really good. Keep Writin poems like that!
    *~.:.~*Lisa Pizza*~.:.~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww...that poem was such a sweet dedication to whomever it was too! I wish them the best of luck too and Hope they return safely home to you! Wonderful job on this poem!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥emma-victoria♥

    amazing poem i enjoyed reading it

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You can feel your love in this poem~ Creative idea! Another good poem! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    5/5 well written. <3