Under the stars

by XxTeArSxX17   Jul 20, 2005


UNDER THE STARS

the stars are so bright
there the guiding light
the moon is peaceful
and so full tonight
you can see it for this
night has no clouds
in sight. The night
is beautiful and the breeze
is just right not to
cold but not to hot
it’s just perfect the
way I like . I love a
night under the stars
for when I am here
I don’t feel so blue

~Ashleigh~

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Fallen Star~*

    thankz for the comment....your poems are good...i like this one:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    aaw very beautyful. great description of the night. i like the night yummy. ahem....anyway. greta poem. you really describe it so vividly and beautyfully.i love this poem. (i wrote a pom about the night yesterday, yours is better) people dont write enough nature poems. especially about the night

  • 18 years ago

    by Pete

    I thought it was a good write, really excellent use of adjectives to describe the scene. Keep it up.

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