Comments : Afraid

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    AMAZING!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hether

    I have a problem and i think that maybe you could help me out...I like this guy and i have since i started 6th grade and Im in 10th now...he flirts with me and stuff and i dont think he knows that i like him as much as i do... do you think that i should tell him??? if you could help me it would really mean alot.... Heather oh by the way great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Wow i loved it so much it relates to me alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    And she goes on watching them as they hold
    Hands and how this girl has everything she wants in
    The palm of her hands, she wish so hard and cries
    So much only for her one dream to become her
    Reality

    Oh my gosh... that part is so sad. This whole poem's amazing, and you've definitely got alot of talent. Keep up the great writing hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    I loved it and it relyl spoke to me and dont worry i have goten ideas from other poems so its cool and thanky ou for the comment on my " crap "

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Well thank you for the comment on my work again and i love all of your work

  • 18 years ago

    by James

    That was very sad but yet Beautiful you have an awesome way with words keep up the excellent write 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marie

    "Of what he might say afraid that he break her heart "

    I dunno why but this line didn't seem to fit to me... maybe try sumthin like

    Of what he might say, afraid that he'd break her heart....

    I dunno just a thought other than that is is a very good poem! Keep up the good work!!!

    Marie

  • 18 years ago

    by lauren.

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by lauren.

    This reminds me of my friend...
    who is dabbling in drugs to get this guy she wants. Depressing.
    But it was amazing.
    Snaps to you.

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Great poem Ash...Thumbs up...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    This is really good,
    slightly sad, yet well written and i can relate to it well!

    XxXxsmilexXxX

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Aww.. Really good. I enjoyed reading it. Well done. xx