Just a shell

by Greta Miller   Jul 20, 2005


Too weak to fight
Too strong to die
Too tired to care
Too beaten to get up
to get up and keep on living
Living like its ok
living like I'm happy
I'm just a shell
of all I used to be
Too hurt to move on
Too betrayed to trust again
Too heartbroken to love again
Too scarred to forgive
Too dead to live.

not my best, but comment any way thanks, hugz*

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  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    This is one of my favs of urs! ur a great poet. i hope u dont feel like this, really, it made me feel like i wasnt alone!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    *tear*..Awww, I seriously hope you dont feel like this and if you do I am so terribly sorry...It breaks my heart reading poems like these and knowing people feel this way! I wish I could take your pain and just throw it away..no one deserves to feel this way...but the poem none the less was great and I really enjoy your stlye of writing! 5 for sure....
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    wow great poem itsdifferent to whta id write and thats what makes it good lol .. 5/5 and tahnks for the nice comment ...

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