Notice me

good poem, allthough it seemed more like u ust wrote down how you were feeling. it had no rhythem to it at all. but the meaning of it means alot and is relateable so 5/5
PaUlEtTe

i gave it a 4...b/c i love how i can relate to how you feel and how you wrote it...but its not exactly a poem...and dosnt hav a form

I know the feeling^^

Good poem, your last line dosent seem to fit though, maybe re-wording it, because it speeks the point beutifuly, however dosent fit right. Your style is very good. unique, keep it up!

You are noticed Emma. With talent like this its hard not to. Kind regards from kane