Mistaken for the Rain

by Mandy Lou   Jul 21, 2005


Cold water washes
These filthly reminders
Of a love I once believed in
From the depths of my soul

No one sees my tears
Mistaken for the rain
They will never know
Why all these tears roll

I will never tell
Of the pain you have caused
Let what you have already done
Go on and take its toll

My heart is no longer
What it used to be
The pain you have caused
Left me less than whole

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    this is really good... i liked it alot... good job keep up the good job
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    this is really good... i liked it alot... good job keep up the good job
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Great Work! I really felt the essence of the poem, you used good language and it flowed excellently without the emphasis needed on rhyme. Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Excellent poem hun. I like your descriptive imagery in this poem. Great work. Relating to a name. perhaps; "more than just a hole" Lol... :D that didnt come out right :) Wait... "Mistaken for the rain" that sounds good :) speak to you soon, from kane x

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