Excellent poem hun! keep it up 5

wow this is a awesome poem one of the best i've read in a while, to me at least. nice job.

AwsomE PoEm it rox
~HazE

Hey, great poem! I like the first stanza the most... all the words are perfect. Great job... keep it up 5/5

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~ Tina

YOU ARE A TRUE POET AT HEART!!! I WANT TO READ UR STORY!! keep it up girl! nice job!
xxxx
emmy

brilliant poem. good work 5/5 x

Wow...cool...what story is that...did u put in up on some website..hmm...I would love to check it out...

Long time no talk, but wow this was great, keep up the good work *tackle*

I really like your angel poems.
My favourite line was:
"a view of snow draped over her body"
--- I really like the image.
Good write!
5/5

Very nice! I really like the description and emotion you expressed in this poem...

on a dark mid-winters day
the wind whispered through her hair

Amazing! 5/5! :)