very well written poem... nice work

Very good flow... this was a dark and sad poem tho... but it was still excellently written.
Great work and stay strong:)

this was very interesting to read and it had a very good flow to it!

Keep up the great work!

-Josiah

Wow.. erika this poem was very saddening.. but as far as making it better there's nothing that i can see.. its perfect as is.. the rhyming was perfect... you had perfect imagry everything had its place and flowed nicely.. great job.. and i enjoyed reading it even though it was so sad. 5/5!

The poem was flawless in itself and the story was really emotional and tear jerking, I felt slightly choked up by the end, it was wonderful, really sad, beautiful poem

xxxx

other than "And eventually the cops will found out" I think you meant find, not found...still...incredible poem...you told of a girls pain in just a few lines and it would've taken me pages to express that! 5/5! It's a great read!

Loved It!...This Was Diffrent Than What I'm Use To...I'm Glad To See Sad Poetry That Isn't Typical 5/5? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

this is very good, i have a friend who has an abusive/achaholic father, i can relate to this poem

*tear falls from face* This is a GREAT poem.

aw, so sad!

thats soo sad.. im almost in tears... that was a great poem.. keep up the great work.... take care

*~peace and love~*

wow what a great poem. you have talent! i enjoyed reading it very much. keep it up

Very well written, the flow was good and the imagery was amazing. Keep up the good work!
-Jenna xo