Lost Without You

by enfant du tordu chagrin   Jul 24, 2005


My heart has vanished
Without a trace
Gone from Me
Like the Sight of your Face

Life seems empty
A world without taste
No sound can move me
Out from this waste

The pain inside
It does slowly gnaw
Eats at my mind
Leaves my heart raw

Yet again I suffer this pain
Make the same mistake
That each time I love
My soul does break

Am I alone in this?
Can it be only me?
Or do others do this too?
And from conscious thought wish to flee?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I really enjoyed reading your poem, I love sad poems, and this is definitely a good one. These are my favorite lines:

    My heart has vanished
    Without a trace
    Gone from Me
    Like the Sight of your Face

    Keep writing. XoXo. G.a.b.y.

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    This is written so well i cant beleive ppl vote u 4.5
    i gave u 5/5
    this poem brings out just how you feel
    its great
    & no ur not alone in this !
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    hi andrew
    i loved this poem. it really touched me, because i am like this too. i am a very social person and get very attached to people. i am especially like this about drugs because they have wrecked the lives of so many that i love.
    but the bottem line is poetry always helps, so keep writing!
    peace
    *rachel*

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    great poem Andrew. it touched my heart. you're so talented.
    take care,
    marjan

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