Looking For...

by Minkus   Jul 24, 2005


It always seems as if
Everyone, everywhere,
Is looking for something
Looking for more
And I don’t know why
Because so am I,
So are we all
It always seems as if
Everyone, everywhere,
Is looking for something
That’s not even there
But instead, is here
Right in front of us
It won’t disappear
Until we look at it
And then it’s inside
Haunting, taunting
Our very minds
Until we collapse, and
Our souls finally find it
The purpose
And meaning
What we’d been looking for.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmm it was good, not the best poem but certainly not the worst. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Very good....although the pattern of the poem threw me off....parts ryhmed and others didnt...it was kind of distracting to the meaning of your poem....4/5 nice job! luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This was good, but I think you could do better...You set a pretty high standard for your writing and this one's almost there...just my opinion, it means nothing! I didn't rate it real low, I gave it 4.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    David, :-O!!!! Loved, loved, loved this poem!!! Definatley liked the flow of it my eyes just zoomed on down each line and I love poems that can make me do that!!! Agree with you 100% on this poem...everyone everywhere is looking for something or someone....I hope you find what you are looking for!! Great Job on this poem...this def. made me smile!
    5..
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    This actually has a good message in it! Once again using your own style which is like nothing I have read before! Love your work! ~Brooke~

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