Under my Make-up

by Iyla   Jul 25, 2005


Under my make-up
lies a pale young face
a hurt depressed girl
wanting to leave this place

everyday she walks out of the house
all kinds of strangers stare
people always making fun of her
hurting her feelings, but they don't care

past my eyeliner, past my shadow
lies a girl who wants to die
because the things people say in this cruel world
there's no way she can survive

under my make-up
is a girl who only thinks of suicide
she thinks it would be better
if she didn't live this life

people stare at her scars
" another depressed goth" is the only thing they said
people think it's funny, but it's no joke
i wonder if they would be surprised if i turned up dead

please be careful of what you say
you might want to stop
because you never know
there may be a suicidal girl under her make-up

* true.. yes... please you guys it really hurts when you say stuff like that*

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  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    awww hunni...i know what it feels like to be called things like that..right after my mates started to make fun of me coz they didnt belive that 7 of mates hav died this year gareth saw my cuts n scars and started calling me a suicidal christian/ b..it..ch...and it really hurt all i cud do is cry

    but then i read a bible verse at cell that night
    and in it God sed that those who belive in Him shall suffer a lil while but then if they rely on HIm, He will make you perfect, happy, and settle you down

    stay strong bbe
    im here for you alwayz n forever and so is GOD...kk

    ur in my prayers ok

    stay here for me plz

    ur frend
    ~ANGEL~

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    God I relate so much to this one, it almost made me cry!!! That was so great, I love ti!!! Sorry that you have to go through this =0(....Just one surgestion: you should try to make the lines more even....Other than that the poem was perfect, nice flow and rhyming....Keep up the good work!!!

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsi

    That concept at the end is very true!! You never know who you are talking to, when it comes to what they hide underneath!! Great job!! Keep writin! 5/5

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