Give it all way...

by Zer0riginZ   Jul 25, 2005


As my life keeps dripping,
My grip keeps slipping,
and my mind keeps skipping,
I gave it all away...

As my soul keeps sailing,
Senses are failing,
my health keeps ailing,
away...

Oh how can you tell,
before I fell,
that I didn't plan to stay... Oh...

While the dead keep walking,
its the living they're stalking.
To the world of sin I give it all away,
join its ranks or become its prey.

Knives are glistening,
shadows are listening,
and the dead laugh at our pain.
With no reason to stay,
and having no other way,
what will we gain.

Just give it all away...

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  • 18 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    Love it. 5/5..
    -PassingAngel

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    KeWL i loved it it was awesome
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved the way it flowed so smoothly. Defiantly one of my favorites by you. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool. Loved how it all flowed nicely together. Very cool. It was an awesome poem done with amazing talent.
    ~FotF

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like it! A song or poem? Had rhythm like a poem....5/5 Zer! AWSOMEY!

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