hey victoria, I loved this poem. it's beautifully written.
and thanks for your lovely comment.
much love,
marjan

How very thoughtful a piece.
This carried a nice flow while impressing a million questions.
We're both deep *smiles*.

Victoria,

So many things to think about in life. In just a few lines, you have put that message across so well. Good write.

Thanks for your comments, deeply appreciated. It was actually the first time that I wrote a Monotetra, so forgive me it it wasn't too good.

Regards,

Steve

Excellent poem, question of what is after death is tough one. Keep up the good work and thanks for the comment. There is one thing I to be certain, there is something after death, but what who is to know?

excellent!!!

Thanks for the comment i am really loved. For your poem a total 5/5
Morana

There are so many questions like that which i find i am asking myself...great poem...left me thinking..thanks for the comment...stay strong
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The answers are there you just have
to listen for them.......Great write....
Enjoyed very much.....Shelby

Another wonderful write. Many questions to be thought about and the answers, I hope, will come in time......... great job once again.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

this is a great poem. keep it up =) please comment back if you can

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

So maybe one day I will give my questions to you
But for now the answers are too far to find
So the questions will stay within my body and mind

i liked this bit but it was all nicely written take care xox

Yes, this world is confusing, and I, myself often go back and forth...is it a beautiful place or cesspool? i may never know.