OMG.. wer do u get such amazing words?? i lovd how the words touched my heart and ur rhyme was gr8.. i found in it a gr8 message to all secret lovers out ther..
keep up the love

This I feel was alot better you really keep the words tight and focused on each other every word seemed to be an extention of thier love very well done I gave you a 5 you deserved it...

This is a beautiful poem. You might want to read through it again to make sure you got the right words in the right places. Him and His kind of thing. I give it 5/5

I like this...this is sweet.

this one isnt my style i guess either.. i couldnt get into.. which is weird cuz i usually ADORE love poems because im madly in love myself... (have been for almost 2 years)... you ahve too many over descriptive words.. it seems like you've strained too much to keep the rhyming pattern.. it takes away from the poem, for me anyways... but like i said before.. dont take what ive said to heart... its just my opinion
amanda

wow.. nice words.. i hope i can write like you.. you have a talent. keep the good job...

Another great poem. They're so long though, but they are full of emotion. I love it. The rhyming was flawless and it flowed very well. Keep it up ♥

I really like this poem a lot. Keep up the great work!!

Wonderful!!!

Very nice, keep up the good work!!