Transparent Grief

by Samantha   Jul 27, 2005


nobody's gonna listen
when you're never right
just give up now
it's a hopeless fight
you can yell
or you can scream
but wholly nothing
is still what it means
claw at the glass
until your hands are covered in blood
fall to the bottom
once you've had enough
you still can't escape
world of see-through misery
the tears that died
bled ever so visibly
and left behind trails
death's innocent remains
you cry harder when you see
the streaks down the glass panes

© Samantha Tulgetske
aka Likuid Pain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Wow very deep and emotional. the rhyming was good except it sounded like you forced some words to rhyme.

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. this was so dark and deep.. i lykd the emotion in it and the imagery u used..
    keep it ups

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    sort of sad, but i like

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow awesome. very unique. I liked the imagery and your rhyme scheme. THe thing i liked most about ti was the ending though it tied it all together! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    very good, some of the rhymes seemed a little forced..but maybe thats just me..i gave you a 5/5 anyways

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