When did you notice?

by M MEM   Jul 27, 2005


When did you notice,
The absence of me?
When did you notice,
The void of she?
When did you notice,
That little scribbled piece of paper?
When did you notice,
That horrible vapor?
When did you notice,
The rope hung from the pipe,
The body hanging,
The body limp,
The body of me?
When did you notice?
Ever?

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  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    YoU hAvE tRuE pOtEnTiAl As A wRiTeR...
    5/5
    <3 eLiZaBeTh

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Broken~And~Twisted

    thats great no need to ever change it because not everything canr rhyme sometiimes it has more meaning when it dont then its your true words keep it up:)
    lv staz xxxXxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    brilliant! but i think it wouldve been better if you made it rhyme, that wouldve been awesome! but still 5/5!!
    great! please comment on mine!
    Hayley-Ree xxx

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