not bad bud - nice thoughts - I liked it

i really enjoyed reading the poem, keep up the good work and dont stop writing, you have a real talent

i liked the poem but the rhyming was kinda scattered. some parts rhymed but some parts didnt.

Nicely done! flowed nicely and its very creative with a diff perspective! grea tjob1 5/5 by far!

That poem was outstanding, It had me from the start to the finish. Great job and i hope to read more soon so keep writing you have alot of talent.

Amazing work. Flowed great and was overall really great! Keep up the great work! 5/5

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

Amazing job. i really enjoyed this one alot. Also thanks for the lovely comments on my poems thanks for being honest and stuff. And i do have some love poems i'm actually putting some on today so if you wanna check them out i would be happy to return the favor also. Anyway you did an amazing job and glad to know that after someone is gone you always have a memorie of them in your heart. And all that other stuff. I hope everything is going alright. Your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I really like this. You're a very good writer. The repitition is effective. Nice work.
Sarah x

Gold star *thumbs a gold star to your shirt collar* best one i have read tonight =)

Nice one...amazing as always...5/5...

I love your work, Amy, keep it up--just beautiful!

Superb! I loved the idea and the way you expressed it. It is just beautiful.

Your poems are all so wonderful.. it's amazing how you can go from a love poem to a lost love poem.. Keep up the amazing work...

I like that you are forward about the things that you want! another awsum poem, i think i've read them all! can't wait to see some new work! well done once again......luv em

I really liked this one, it was beautiful, and sends a message. Sometimes the flow was abit off... but other then that, still beautiful! I really like it=D

I love the determination and beauty of this poem
Well Done
Sondos

Wow, another great poem. Really enjoyed reading it. I liked your style, it was different and well done. The lines which i liked the most were:

"I will not be a mistake
Or something you have to forget
I can be the slightest breeze
That passes through your life
The smile that comes from thinking
Of me on a rainy night"

Well said and good use of vocabulary. Definatly deserves a 5/5. Keep up the awesome work and never stop writing. Your a very taletned writer.
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo