A young girl

by Andrea broken tears   Jul 27, 2005


Sunday night ten minutes to ten
a young girl thought it was her
end.
She was so weak
because she did not
eat that day.
Ten minutes before she went to bed
she slit her wrist
thinking this the end.
The young girl was getting weak
but she couldn't get to sleep.
She knew she never said goodbye
a smile hidden beneath lies
is how she lives her life
in so much pain and strife.
Shes not expecting to make it through the night
the young girl doesn't even put up a fight.
She lays in her bed
hoping this is the end
as she drifts off to
never land.

**this is a true story because the young girl is me and i almost did succeed in doing that**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    erm....i agree with all those ppl, ow long ago was that? all these ppl including myself care about u, and im sure other people u know do, so plz don't end ur life and plz dont try again. ur too young, and theres to much u aint seen and done....

    take care
    love mark xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    that is a really great poem!!!!! i loved it. thanks 4 the comments. it means allot to me too. i think xtine is alright.. i talked to her last night. i really hope shes ok anyway. great poem. i hope ur ok too...

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    I would beg you not to end your life however i know that NO one on this earth can stop u if u rele rele want to. I want u to stay here on earth here where u can write poems because u do amazing work it is so crafty and inteligent it is stuff i could nvr ever write in a million years! Keep writing and well stay here on earth and honestly talk to me ill help if i can
    love
    Katie

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